WRITE FOR THE WHOLE WORLD!
The learning came about due to a simile I'd written about 'sinking boats and fisherman' lore.
I'm a fisherman's daughter.
Pay closer attention in my writing (and my life) to my assumptions about mythologies and history. They may not be shared or understood by everyone.
The good news:
I have10 days (okay 9 now) to revise my novel to incorporate that feedback and invite EVERYONE into the world of PAPILLON.
Did I mention I was moving in 10 days????
This makes me only slightly more batty than usual.
Happy Monday Writerlies & Friends,
UPDATE: MADE IT TO THE NEXT ROUND! WOO-HOO!!!