Looking forward to seeing the writerlies tomorrow! Our first 2013 gathering (the year of my cat:) is tomorrow at 7 pm. Check in-boxes for details. While my 3rd novel's characters keep cavorting and hiding behind curtains (acting all obtuse), I'm focusing on my one-page/morning STROEMS (oh so inventive, I know; they're part story-part poem). MY FIRST REVISION of July Moments in January Feel free to critique away!! Btw, I have to update our writing group meeting schedule. Done ✓ Happy Scribing! TartanFrog (aka Dina)
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Hi Dina. Like it MUCH better now :-) Feel the last sentence re. nuclear is unnecessary and diluting. Also feel the sentence re. fleches is confusing. Think Jenni should say, But this is not Sherwood Forest. Otherwise me like muchly. Also, thanks for the schedule
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Dina
1/7/2013 03:44:23 am
Thanks Jenni!
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